I would run for years if what I was chasing was you
They say you cannot be attained but I know I can
Because there is something different about me & you
You & me
Us
Because we are whole
The priors indicate separateness
Not whole
But that "US" represents unity
A bond
Something that can never be broken
It represents one
Because when I look at you and look at me
I see one
I see complete
In essence...I see 7
When most people speak of their relationships
They use terms such as "good" and "great"
But when I think of us..
I think complete
Who am I?
- Q
- Everything you want to know can be found in my work...Its me, my thoughts, my feelings, my everything with NO filters.
6 comments:
Wow, I must say to is my favorite so far. I'm feeling real mushy right now :D.
One of the greatest feelings in the world comes when you have someone who make you feel complete, make you feel like you have found everything that you been searching for in a mate...
I just love this one
Well Well Well, looks likes someone was feeling heartfelt this week.. I like it a lot you have a way with words.. LOL can't put that any other way.. How about something inspirational next time.. Like Barack Obama status LOL I Got Hope!
Keep it up!
This is really sweet; she is a lucky girl; whomever she may be:)I hope she reads this and realizes it if she hasn't already; good guys are hard to come by and especially one that can express their feelings with words and not "sexual" actions; making love to the soul through words is a greater excitement!! At least personally it is....
Awww, this is really a nice poem. If it is dedicated to someone, she is really a fortunate person. Hopefully one day we all will find that person that makes us complete. Keep up the good work
Wow, that was amazing.
This has depth that extends beyond it's inception. At first it reads as a love story between a lover and the beloved...until 7! Then it shifted. For me it then evolved to a spiritual relationship between the created and the creator. Indicative of what seven represents spiritually, which is completion, it is only there where completion is fully manifested...right? If only we could truly find that level of completeness in another person...I enjoyed this one because it made me reach both emotionally and spiritually.
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