Wednesday, September 3, 2008

A Good Woman Part 2!

My good woman
My real good woman
She don't curse and don't drink
And she is really into me..I think
Doesn't matter, cuz ima make her mine with this line or the next one
And if not that then the next one or the next
This lady got me going crazy
Pick pocketed my heart before I showed her where I kept it
From the first time we locked eyes she peeped it so like a thief she just had to steal it
She's only human and I like that, she ain't perfect and neither am I
She's not really jealous and never goes nuts
And when I get introspective she is able to stay cool calm and collected maintaining her own perspective as our hearts dance to the beats of their own drums which just happens to be playing the same melody
Now don't think im getting mushy!
I'm just saying she's pretty cool
Kinda like if snow came in August or just plain old ice cubes
But this above average, extra ordinary, heart stealing thief has me tap dancing on cloud 10 just so I can look down at the losers on 9 and scream
"YOU'RE NOT AS HAPPY AS ME!!"
Wanna know what's even crazier?
I don't really know her
She is just a pretty face and a few exchanged words
Yet I feel a spark, no! a connection
The kind that only comes from post adolescent textin
Cuz when you grow up, your texts say more than lol and jk
They actually have SUBSTANCE
So I patiently wait for the day my lips come in contact with the woman who stole my heart
I won't take it back, instead I'll give her the rest of me
The complete package
Because she is:
Beautiful
Witty
Funny
Smart
Classy
Ambitious
A lover
A friend
She is the woman in the purple dress
She is super woman and wonder woman with a lil bit of cat woman all rolled into one
She is my GOOD woman

4 comments:

GoAstin118 said...

I love it. This poem is first-class. You are amazing with expressing your emotions and thoughts. Hopefully one day we all will have a person like that in our life.

BeautyJJB said...

Sounds like a Great Woman, I like this one it got more interesting line after line...pretty much speechless :D

LadyC said...
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LadyC said...

Your writing has grown alot in comparison to Part 1! Good work hun! And I see you still want a woman like your sister ;-)