Physically I'm here but mentally I'm not
I'm at the point where I just don't care
And if you're wondering...yes you drove me here!
Taking me for granted, I just couldn't stand it
I needed to be free I needed to be me
But I never left because I'm a good man
I let drive you drive me insane! I swear 6 more months they would have called me Claude Cobain
But still you couldn't see that you were hurting me
So I let my heart drift then my mind split!
My thought process you finally got it when I stopped it??
Realized you were wrong when my mind was gone??
And now you want back?? haha All I could do is laugh at that
I endured a mental separation to be greatly appreciated
But you let my mind slip for too long cuz physically I'm here but mentally I'm gone
We were once 2 souls connected by love, 2 hands connected by a touch
We went from inseparable to irreparable now my mind ain't even missing you
My thoughts are dissing you, silly boo, I don't even wanna kiss you
I endured a mental separation to be greatly appreciated
But in my appreciation I realized my own hatred for what we've become
Yes I see one...a future
not me & you but me & her
So yes I do see 1..no I see 7, but you wouldn't understand that because when it came to us I was always a separate man
So as I sit next to you and write this, type this, and jot this..I realize I'm timeless
Because with you nothing makes sense and nothing is right so tonight
My physical
has become part
of my
Mental Separation..
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5 comments:
ok Claude, I see your poems are getting deeper and I like it. Sadly this happens to all the good people. She did not deserve having you from the beginning. You deserve a good woman. They always realize it when you do not want them any more but your separation is the right thing. Good poem, write more =)
This reminds me of people who stay together because they are afraid to be alone. Those relationships that start off good and end horribly. You can almost feel the annoyance and indifference from just reading this. Very nice.
Yes Bestfriend I can really relate to this in so many ways...this is a GREAT! Poem when you gave your all in any relationship & the person messes that up...when you finally break away from their spell you feel free & come 2 realize that you don't care about that relationship anymore...then they start to realize that you don't care...so they tryin to get that old thing back like Jay-z states....but by that time its too late...love it
All I can say is that i absolutely love it!!! The title alone is what caught my attention to make me read deeper and deeper into it. I can truly relate to an experience I dealt with last year which I vowed to neva let happen again. "She" definitely lost one!
My jaw literally dropped!!I can't believe you stayed that long for her to drive you that far, but i'm glad you kept ya dignity and kept it moving because you deserve so much better.
*don't let it happen again*
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