Saturday, February 28, 2009

Unfinished

i want to write this poem about opportunity, opportunity missed that is
see i was kinda dealing with this miss
who had it all, brains beauty and a tender kiss
but circumstance always kept us from being together
but in the back of my mind i knew that she was better
than anyone else i ever dealt with
and our vibe was so strong that the world could feel it
but circumstance always kept us apart...
she is the love i never got to experience
the truth i never got to grasp
the touch i never got to hold
she is the world i never got to explore...

i know she would have given me the type of love people don't believe in anymore
but i was too late...


This poem isn't finished and I will probably never finish it, it was just too hard to write but I wanted to put it up to see what you think....Love's crazy..crazy...crazy....

5 comments:

Mz. H said...

I will always believe that what is meant to be yours will be when it is meant to be. Very interesting poem.

Anonymous said...

Awww quelindo!!! I agree with the comment left above. Very enticing Mr.Q.


MiSS Rhea

Lady Kay said...

DEEP.... VERY DEEP. (snapping). i also agree wit mz.H.

dee said...

gotta say very interesting what ever happen tho?

Anonymous said...

This is deep, who was she? Even is she moved on, let her know how you felt. Very good poem.